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PostSubject: My Poem.   Wed Aug 04, 2010 9:00 am

Hey guys, I had to write a poem for my class. I'm turning it in on friday. What do you guys think?




“City Speaks”

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CONTACT _Con-3781D10E1 \c \s \l Ryan Tipton
Period 3



Does the city speak?
Has the night begun to peak?

As if to mock the sight of day
The city’s lights are on display

Poisonous fumes fill the air
It’s becoming quite hard to bear

The constant stumbling of a drunk
Wanting only to be in his bunk

Underneath the saloon’s drape
Contemplating tonight’s escape

He leaves the safety of his seat
But rebellious, are his feet

For, the street’s corner is where he lies
Overcome by the city’s cries

Fleeing from this unbearable sound
He crawls along the dirty ground

Slowly reaching the building wall
Trying so hard not to fall

But atlas! The lights are spinning
The alcohol will soon be winning

Grasping his knees
He succumbs to disease

Eyes, watering up
Like an infant, he throws up

Not even God would contest
That this city gives no rest

Not to the weak nor the weary
Most, find this place quite eerie

Helped to his feet by stubbornness alone
The man begins trudging without even a moan

Destitute, broken, and constantly abused
The city doesn’t mind; in fact it’s amused

Drunk and fumbling it’s the middle of night
Without any will left, he concludes the fight

Unwilling, unable, to take anymore
His body collapses upon the pavement floor

He’s attempting fetal position
Crying and pleading, as if in submission

The man is closing his eyes
Thus confirming his own demise

The city’s response is loud and coarse
For the billboard above, reads “no remorse”




AUTHOR Ryan Tipton Page PAGE 1 DATE 8/3/10
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PostSubject: Re: My Poem.   Sat Aug 07, 2010 4:11 pm

I dont know much about poems but it was nice reading, hope you get a good grade on it... cyclops
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PostSubject: Re: My Poem.   Sat Aug 07, 2010 9:58 pm

Haha.... i didn't read it... i don't like reading :]
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PostSubject: Re: My Poem.   Sun Aug 08, 2010 12:29 am

95% on it lmao,

yea i hate poetry too.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poem.   Sat Aug 14, 2010 5:23 pm

LOL!!! Wow.. i wish i was like you... you hate poetry, but you can write it... Next thing you're gonna say you hate essays but you get 100s on them... >Sad
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PostSubject: Re: My Poem.   Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:54 am

lol noo haha your making me look like a douche haha JSM, thats the first real poem i've ever written. I wasn't sure if I was going to do well on it. Very Happy
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